I worked with a Brilliant copywriting agency to redefine their content strategy
I’ve written tons of case studies for clients, and blog posts on why case studies suck, and presentations full of ideas on how to make them better. But I’ve never done one for my own business – until now.
Is it the best case study I’ve ever written? Probably not. Does it avoid all the mistakes other case studies make? Definitely not. Does it have gazillions in revenue attributed to my work ? Also no. (Not yet, anyway.) But is it for one of the loveliest, most responsive, excitable and great-at–their-jobs clients a consultant could wish for? Absolutely.
Everyone, meet Radix:
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(Don’t be put off by the teenie-looking and not very B2B app. It’s not Linkedin, but it’ll do the job).
Can’t wait to hear from you.
(Oh and if you like my content, I’d appreciate a share or a recommendation)
First question is in, and it’s brilliant:
That’s a really tough one. If there was one surefire formula, I’d be rich.
The issue is that startup founders are really hard nuts to crack, for a number of reasons:
They tend to be super smart themselves, which can make them sceptical of other people’s expertise, especially when, as founders, they’ve had to do a bit of everything – Marketing, Sales, Bookkeeping, HR… It can make them think they are experts at everything
They know their product like no one else (often because they’ve built it themselves), and don’t trust outsiders to represent it accurately
If the founder is a techie, scientist, or software engineer, they sometimes don’t fully understand the need for comms. They think their product is brilliant and assume everyone else can see that, too
In the early stages they’re often involved in Sales themselves. They may have spoken to customers and heard about their pain points. And they’ll have prepared answers for them. But often, when they scale and make that first marketing hire, they forget to share all that useful knowledge with their marketing person. And then don’t understand why other people just don’t get it.
Now I don’t know if any of the above is the case with your founders. But here are some arguments that have worked for me in the past:
1. The people in your target companies who “get the tech” are usually not the same ones who “have the money”. You need a comms specialist to translate the features of your product into benefits for non-techie budget holders
2. We need to get the narrative out of your head and onto a document so we can all be on the same page on what it is we do, who it’s for, and why they should care. If we don’t do this, our story will be inconsistent, and we won’t be able to scale our marketing efforts (eg brief copywriters who can do some of that work for us)
3. You’re biased. (This one works well with scientists). Because you’re so convinced that your product is amazing, you can be blind to the reasons why buyers may be sceptical, the workarounds they’ve learned to live with, and the internal resistance they’re facing. An outsider who understands tech buying processes and audiences, and who has experience poking holes in the story, and asking uncomfortable questions can help us make our story so much stronger.
I’m sure there’s more and I’ll update with other points when I think of them. I hope this has been helpful! (you can drop an anonymous comment to let me know).
Question #2 is about value proposition canvases
I can hear the frustration in this one. And I share it. To answer it, I’m going to have to make some assumptions:
I’m assuming you’re talking about canvases like the Strategyzer one
I’m assuming you’re talking about the absolute state they end up in after a half-day stakeholder workshop, full of bullets and buzzwords and sticky notes
And then my answer is absolutely, no, they’re not useful as value propositions. Except:
There are two purposes to a workshop like that. Only one of them is to arrive at a value proposition. The other is to get all the stakeholders into a room, get them to dedicate some brain space to the key questions every business needs to ask itself, and make them feel that they’ve been asked and have been heard. This is hugely useful. Because it gets them on board with the process and limits them in their ability to undermine your efforts further down the line (at least if they don’t want to look like an absolute tool).
The output from a value proposition workshop is not a value proposition. At least not straight away. It’s a brain dump where you’ve collected – and ideally weighted – the key issues. Now is where the real work starts. In my opinion, good value propositions are not created by committee. The issues need to be ordered, distilled, outliers weeded out, missing information (such as e.g. customer insight) researched and added. Only then do you start copywriting and polishing it.
It also helps to nominate an ultimate decision-maker with whom the buck stops. (Ideally choose someone very senior, decisive and not-too-precious). It’s their job to make the tough calls on points of disagreement, and everybody involved needs to be aware of the importance of this. Because you’re absolutely right: bloated and sad never got no leads excited.
But in summary: if you think as the workshop as at least 40% kum-ba-yah, and of its output as loose materials that give you a starting point, then that messy canvas becomes less frustrating. In my experience, anyway.
I hope my assumptions were right and this was a helpful answer.
Feel free to get in touch again if not.
Question 3 is about turning value props into content
Nice one!
My general advice would be that your best content will always come from the things that you know better than anybody else. The things you could actually teach. And that your prospects will care about. Ideally, once you’ve gone through the process of distilling what that is, that has become an essential part of your value proposition, too.
But it’s a hard one to answer in the abstract. So I’ll use an example. Let’s say you’re in the data center business, and you have a number of data centers in the UK that are equipped with such an amazing low latency network that you can reliably power edge applications. That’s already pretty cool. But say you’ve also developed water cooling technology so that your data centers do all this high-performance stuff without costing additional energy to stop your servers sweating.
Then you have that amazing intersection of
A) Something you know better than anybody else – i.e. more eco-friendly high-performance computing
B) Something your target audience cares about – meeting sustainability goals across their entire business, including in IT operations
And that intersection is where the good content is hidden.
You could now e.g. create content about “net-zero multiplayer gaming” (which combines the edge computing and sustainability themes). Ideally you’d already have a customer in that space that you could showcase, but the beauty of this is that you could even interview the CEO of that gaming company and make them the hero of a blog post or video. Even if you don’t know them. They’re not going to refuse getting to tell their story, and exchanging ideas with a like-minded business. By highlighting their good work, you’re automatically claiming that space, too – without explicitly beating your own drum.
(And then of course you do all the usual content strategy stuff of planning out your hero pieces and different formats, and the channels where your audience hangs out etc).
Thank you for this excellent question!
Question 4 is about the voice of the customer
Oh man. Love that somebody asks about this. (You may have seen me post about it on Linkedin the other day). It’s something I keep banging on about. I have worked on a ton of projects where my request to speak to an actual customer was met with blank stares or impatience.
In fact, in my experience it’s not so much the lack of resource that stands in the way of customer insight, but the fact that many marketers don’t understand the importance of it. They’re not always to blame though. In plenty of organisations it’s the salespeople who gatekeep their customers, and they won’t let marketers speak to them. It’s a big problem.
But to answer your question, speak to as many customers as you can for you positioning or value proposition or messaging project, and if you’re in-house, make it a regular ritual to interview customers, especially when things change – eg the market, or your product, or the distribution model, or the competition…
Having said that, there is a point of diminishing returns. For a project I did last year for a services org, I interviewed 10 CIOs of enterprise-sized companies across the world. And while each geography, person and industry reported unique challenges, there was a point around interview #7 where I felt a story emerge, and key elements kept repeating. But this varies from project to project and will also depend on…
The newness and complexity of your proposition
The attitudes, maturity and appetite of your customer base
The number of decision-makers who are typically involved
how challenging it is to adopt your product…and so much more.
But as a general rule, if you’re a strategist and you’re told you can’t speak to a customer, raise the alarm with the person who hired you for the job.
Look, you probably don’t need another hot take on whether marketers should be using AI-generated marketing content, by a marketing strategist, but here it is anyway:
I rarely hear anybody talk about the key assumption behind this tedious debate: the assumption that it’s a marketer’s job to produce a lot of content.
When in fact, it’s the job of marketing to produce good content: ideally genuinely new ideas, presented in a fresh way, that resonate with the people you’re targeting.
From what I’ve seen so far, that’s the opposite of what AI does.
What, actually, is the job of Marketing?
ChatGPT regurgitates things that already exist out there, in ways that already exist out there. Assembling words with the highest likelihood of being used in collocation by the highest number of people. Sometimes, the writing is tolerable. Often, it presents utter shite with a level of confidence I can only aspire to. (George over at Radix has written a fine blog about “AI eating itself” with much more nuance than I can muster).
The output from this exercise is the definition of middling. The literary world’s equivalent of brown. If that’s what you think your marketers’ job is, then go ahead.
In my mind then, you have a completely different problem: that you don’t understand the de-familiarising power of unique words (or images, if you’re using AI for visuals) to help us see well-known things in a new light, or the function they have in engaging audiences, or the blank-everything-else-out effect that a genuinely new idea can have, or the responsibility you have as a brand that targets people to not bore them stiff. And yes, your responsibility to hire and train marketers that understand these things. Who can tell a good headline from bad, who know what a differentiator is, who can brief in and feed back on copy.
If you do understand these things, and still use ChatGPT, then you know that getting the prompts right takes such a level of customisation and tweaking that you might as well use that time to write the damn thing.
A ChatGPT experiment
So far, there’s only one use case I can see where ChatGPT being genuinely helpful, and that’s for functional content that follows a clear template. Invites, sign-up forms, things that have a formula. I’ll give you an example of an instance where ChatGPT has impressed me (and, in red, the bits I loved and the ones where I think it falls flat):
Prompt:
Write a sales email to a prospect in which I invite them to sign up to our webinar on the topic of best practice in Modular ERP. [simply because I had a chat about AI-generated content with an ERP client of mine last week]
What ChatGPT came up with:
Subject: Invitation to Webinar: Best Practices in Modular ERP
Dear [Prospect’s Name],
[it’s great that it signals all the core bits of information that need to be there, such as subject lines and placeholders for names, dates and times. You wouldn’t believe how many emails go out with the essentials missing. Wish it had given me a preview snippet for the email as well, and maybe a second subject line for A/B testing, but it’s pretty good.]
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to reach out to you because I believe you would find great value in our upcoming webinar on “Best Practices in Modular ERP.”
[“Find great value” is terribly generic. Why/ why for me/what’s the value? Similarly, “finds you well” is tired language, plus double use of “find”. A good editor would spot that.]
In today’s fast-paced business environment, having a flexible and scalable ERP system is crucial for optimizing operations and staying competitive.
[“Today’s fast-paced environment”. I couldn’t believe it went there. The most telling sign of lazy writing. It says you should care but I don’t. It claims urgency without proving it. Absolute no-go. I actually have a voodoo doll in the likeness of that phrase that I stick pins in at night. But: I was impressed that it hit a crucial business benefit of modular ERP. Optimising operations is indeed something a well set up ERP does and I hadn’t briefed that in. I assume that means it’s what everyone says, though. “Staying competitive” is the same as “fast-paced environment”: it’s so generic a benefit – duh – that you should step away from it].
Our webinar will delve into the benefits and strategies of implementing a modular ERP approach, allowing businesses like yours to tailor their systems to meet specific needs and scale efficiently.
[My main issue with this paragraph is that it sounds good at first reading, and then you realise it doesn’t actually say anything. Meet specific needs indeed].
During the webinar, our expert speakers will cover:
The advantages of modular ERP over traditional monolithic systems [Loved that word. I suspect everyone uses it or it wouldn’t have made its way into this]
Key considerations for selecting and implementing modular ERP solutions
Real-world case studies highlighting successful implementations
Strategies for maximizing ROI and long-term sustainability [Great work if you can get it, but I hadn’t briefed that in and I’d want to check that I can actually deliver on case studies and ROI before I send this out]
Date: [Insert Date] Time: [Insert Time] Duration: [Insert Duration] [thanks for the reminders, this is useful!]
This webinar presents a unique opportunity to gain valuable insights and actionable strategies directly from industry experts. Plus, it’s completely free to attend. [Love all these AI-generated case studies and experts I don’t have, that really makes my job a lot easier. Wait, what do you mean, free. IT’S NOT FREE. by which I mean, you really gotta check the content of this stuff]
To secure your spot, simply click the link below to register: [Insert Registration Link]
If you have any questions or would like more information, feel free to reach out to me directly. We’re here to support you on your journey towards optimizing your ERP system.
[Switching between “I” and “We” is not a great look, but I do it on this website as well, so I’ll let it go]
We look forward to having you join us for this informative session. [the rule is “Show don’t tell”. That’s for them to find out, not for you to claim.]
I found it too long and generic, but part of that was down to the minimal briefing. If you’re writing a generic format like an invite, my take is you could save yourself a lot of time by getting ChatGPT to write it for you. But only if you then invest the effort into making it good, and importantly, yours. Saying things that are different and new, and unique to your brand. Also maybe injecting a bit of personality into that voice.
What it alerted me to was this: whenever it came up with bits that sounded industry-specific, but were actually too high-level to say anything much, that was a red flag for me: the way the technology works means that it can only have pulled this from existing content about modular ERP and these things must have been the safest common denominator. They’re the most generic things you could possibly say about the topic, and from my marketer’s POV, therefore useless. They don’t contain any differentiators or value propositions, or product features or audience insight – none of the elements that make marketing good, and specific to you. So I guess you could use it as a tool to establish the absolute minimum baseline of what others in your industry are saying. Then pivot the shit away from that.
My TL;DR point though is this:
It’s Marketing’s job to figure out what to say and to whom
…and ChatGPT can’t solve that for you (not yet anyway).
The real problem is that most companies considering ChatGPT have got the job of the marketer all wrong. They burden in-house marketers with producing all this formulaic crap that nobody reads, and they don’t challenge them to make it good, or give them the time to develop genuine differentiators. They literally think they’re in the business of producing words. If, at a time, where formulaic content production cost has hit quite literally zero, they can’t pivot away from that and start seriously re-considering the job of the marketer, I can only hope the market will punish them.
If, however, it makes them realise that the marketer’s job is to think about all the hard things – what we’ve got to say, why we should be saying it, and why people should care – then I, for one, welcome our LLM-powered artificial overlords with open arms.
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